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Maybe it's Dumas... I think he might possibly be related to the enemy agent in the last spy story I did.overbarrel49 wrote:i assume the MacHottie's security guard's name is dumbass...........although that's apparently NOT what Scottie is calling him in panel 604.
Yeah. Even though I only showed one panel of the spanking Scottie gave her, it actually lasted quite a while! Scottie has a lot of stamina for a man his age!overbarrel49 wrote:it looks like agent Burns is now taking the "any port in a storm" approach to retrieving the black bird. it's funny but Katie seems to be rubbing her bottom in all the pics......at least until the dog shows up.
Yeah. For Katie to try to talk her way out of a spanking is always a lost cause, but sometimes she makes a valiant attempt.overbarrel49 wrote:in panel 605 Katie seems to be talking way too much. a classic case of over analysis...........as if she was a naughty girl who was trying to talk her way out of a spanking .as in most cases, however, it seems more like she was talking herself INTO a spanking.
I'm glad you liked that one.overbarrel49 wrote:nice shot of Katie's luscious backside in panel 606 with the red glowing through that impossibly thin suit that hugs ever curve and crevice.
I sort of ripped off (or perhaps you could say i did an homage of) an old joke about two campers and a bear that was chasing them. The idea of having the dog grab the seat of someone's pants to restrain them was my own idea. Of course, we see what happens when the dog tries to grab the thinly-stretched fabric of the outfit Katie is wearing! Heh heh!overbarrel49 wrote:i like agent Burns "theory" on outrunning the dog in panel 607. i'm not sure, but i think in panel 608, Katie may have actually sucked in her bottom to stay ahead of the dog. in any case, it's a nice shot of her running.
A tenderhearted young lady she is... in addition to having that other tender part that we all know so well!overbarrel49 wrote:Poor Katie looks oh soooo embarrassed at having the seat of her pants ripped out in panel 609 but then turns around and bends over the dog to see if he's all right.
Poor Katie! She never can talk any of the men in her life out of spanking her!overbarrel49 wrote:that's NOT what agent Burns is "seeing" about though. nice shiny, red hiney on Katie there too and after all the over analyzing, in panel 610 Katie is once again surprised to find out that agent Burns is going to spank her "before" they return to headquarters.
I think Agent Burns has at least two very good reasons to give Katie a nice long spanking. First of all there's the fact that he knows he's accountable to Argyle for her mistake that cost them the mission. He's going to make her pay with a literal spanking for the verbal spanking he's anticipating. And, of course, for Burns, being a male agent, a verbal spanking is all he'll get from Argyle. (Don't worry! There'll be no M/M scenes in this story!) In addition to that, there's the tempting target she's been flashing in his face every time she turns her back on him! What red-blooded American man would pass up a chance to turn Katie over his knee if she gave him an viable excuse?overbarrel49 wrote:i love Katie's bouncing, red bottom and apprehensive expression in panel 611. while Katie's expression is also good in panel 612, i really like the evil smile on Burns face and of course, the placement of his hand as he turns her over . Katie's cherry red bottom goes nicely with the multitude of stars also.
Yes! I'm glad you saw that! Agent Burns is winking at the audience, because he knows that you know that he's deliberately hitting every bump on that bumpy road on their way back to town!overbarrel49 wrote:i believe agent Burns is actually winking at us in panel 613 as Katie complains about the bumps on the way back. i'll be waiting to see what happens when they get back to headquarters.
Heh heh! I enjoyed that too!web-ed wrote:I think the funniest part here is when Katie is being spanked and is reminded they're going to have to drive back - her poor bottom!
Yeah. I wanted it to be big enough to show what it was. But you're absolutely right. If it was solid wrought iron, it would be way to heavy for one man to carry. Even if it was hollow, it would be pretty heavy. However, as you say, artistic license! Or maybe Agent Burns is incredibly strong... Nah! I'll just go along with artistic license!web-ed wrote:But let's back up a bit. There's some artistic license in #605 where Agent Burns is carrying a statue that must weigh about a ton, at least if it's solid. But you know, that's what a license is for, so no problem.
I'm glad you liked that. I went back and added the dog to the story after I had gotten all the way to the end of the story... And next, she'll have to report to Mr.Argyle with her ripped-out outfit. AFTER that long and bumpy ride back to S.P.A.N.K. headquarters! Poor girl! She just can't catch a break, can she?web-ed wrote:I think the dog tearing out the seat of Katie's pants is the cleverest way I've seen to arrange for a spankee's bottom to be conveniently bare - and what could be better than an OTK bare-bottom spanking, which is what Katie gets only five panels later in #612?
Yeah... and even if he wasn't justified, I think he would've come up with some kind of excuse to turn the junior agent in his charge over his knee.web-ed wrote:I think this spanking is fully justified, for all the reasons Agent Burns mentioned, but then maybe I'm slightly biased .
He bought it from Delores the first time she stole it. I think he might've kept it in his house for a while and eventually he would've returned it to its rightful owner... probably asking for a modest finder's fee... But since Delores is a thief without honor, she was going to steal it from him and sell it to someone else.web-ed wrote:I still have one question though: how did Scottie MacHottie wind up with The Black Bird in the first place?
Yeah. Other than the original premise in the first story that she looks like Delores (except for her hair color) and is easy to disguise, I think the main reason Argyle keeps her around is that he's looking forward to his next chance to chastise her for a major blunder.daneldorado wrote:I see that Katie is getting deeper and deeper into the espionage business. But she is such a klutz, I have to believe that one of the reasons the leaders of S.P.A.N.K. utilize her as often as they do, is because they know in their heart of hearts that she will provide them with multiple excuses to spank her!
Sometimes adverse criticism is needed. I take note of what you don't like, keeping in mind that there are probably readers out there who are thinking the same thing you are, but don't bother to express their views. Also, criticism is easier to take when it is presented in in a polite way. You never insult me. Rather, you just present the facts as you see them.daneldorado wrote:B00m, what I'm about to say may seem like adverse criticism, but please remember: I do appreciate you and your wonderful talent for creating all these spanking stories, and then fleshing them out as cartoons for all of us to enjoy.
I can see your point there, and I'd certainly not do that to a woman in real life. Spankings are supposed to make a woman's buttocks feel hot and tingly, whereas the bumpy ride in the jeep would most likely ache. But I believe that there are more liberties that can be taken with cartoon characters than real people (or even actors in a movie). And she did bring a pillow along!daneldorado wrote:In my humble opinion, the spankings that Katie receives en route to her latest adventure are all motivated by proper reasons (Well, maybe some of them are a little shaky... ) right up to the point where you seem to take great pleasure from her bumpy ride back to headquarters. Sure, it's funny and it's cute when you get to put a pretty woman over your lap and just whale away at her backside. But to then force her to sit in a rickety Jeep and deliberately drive her over a bumpy road, with the driver making sure she suffers from every little bump... Sorry, b00m, but I call that sadism.
The idea here is that Delores, the enemy spy that Katie is supposed to be impersonating is somewhat of an exhibitionist... As Argyle puts it, she enjoys flaunting her feminine curves. And you're right... the outfit does not provide adequate protection. That's why it gave way so easily when the dog grabbed it... and why she felt every bit of the spankings she's gotten while wearing that outfit. But I know that you don't like her outfit. Does anyone? I thought it was something really sexy for her to wear. Tight and almost transparent. I'd like to know what the rest of you think.daneldorado wrote:Now, on to Katie's catburglar outfit: You are right, I once referred to it as leather and again as latex. But now you are saying it is neither. Is it some kind of body suit made of the same material that goes into pantyhose? Doesn't seem that an outfit like that could adequately protect the gal who wears it, especially if she is involved in some sort of physical exertion. But whatever....
Part of that is a limitation with certain backgrounds. Usually, when I do multiple panels of the same spanking, I like to circle around the characters, showing them from different angles. I have a few backgrounds that I've only made one side of. Showing the spanking from different angles would require different angles of the background too, and I just got lazy. Later in the story, I'll have some spankings that are more than one panel... but I'm also going to do a few more that are only one. I suppose you can take solace in the fact that this story contains A LOTOF SPANKINGS! There are more to come.daneldorado wrote:In this "Black Bird" scenario, my favorite scenes are the ones that show a spanking underway. That said, I would appreciate more of them. Yes, I realize that you are trying to make room for the story, but what we like best are the spanks. Early on, we see Mr. Argyle spank Katie in multiple panels; but he spanks Marie in only one panel, and Dave gets to spank Katie in only one panel as well. Later on, Scottie MacHottie spanks Katie twice, but they are both single-panel shows.