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willjohn wrote:I R Baboon told us "You don't need pants for a victory dance" but they may give comfort in an ignominious defeat such as Xandra's in her "ouchie dance."

Sitting would be out of the question for quite a while too.
Hi Willjohn,

Well, in Xandra's case, it's a good thing pants aren't required :lol: . I have to agree that sitting isn't going to be high on her list of things to do for a while 8-) . thanks, Phil
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I'm a little late here, Phil, but happy to see the latest installment. I think we all love to see the spankee rubbing her bottom after the spanking, and Xandra does that one better by adding a little dance. Meanwhile, her housemates continue to rub it in - I don't see how Xandra lives this episode down as she's sure to be taunted about it pretty much forever :lol: !

I can't imagine what comes next, but I'm eager to find out. :)
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Web-ed wrote:

Meanwhile, her housemates continue to rub it in - I don't see how Xandra lives this episode down as she's sure to be taunted about it pretty much forever :lol: ! I can't imagine what comes next, but I'm eager to find out. :)

Earlier, I wrote that it looked to me as if this story had come to an end when Walter ended his fiery attack on Xandra's bottom... but Phil Overbarrel replied that no, he has more of the story in mind. It's been an exhausting voyage, just getting us -- ALL of us -- to this point. I can't imagine what lies in store for us now, unless Walter plans to begin spanking all the other sorority sisters, one by one; and that would be SIX (6!) more girls, if I'm counting right! Seriously now, do you think Walter would have that much energy left, after all he has just been through?

I agree that Xandra's future will feature A LOT of "taunting" from her girlfriends. After all, they have just witnessed their friend getting the mother of all spankings, and on her bare derriere! Yep, Xandra will be hearing about this episode for a long time to come. She may decide to change schools, move out of state, even change her name, to avoid hearing these stories for the rest of her life!

b00m wrote:

With Xandra's promise to be a good girl, and Walter telling her she can get up, it looks like the spanking is over... but you informed Dan that the story isn't. Hmmmm! I'm guessing we'll see, at the very least, Walter taking Xandra into his arms to reassure her that he still loves his naughty girl.

Mmm, yeah. Now THAT's the sort of ending I envision for this very enjoyable story.

Cheers,
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Hi, Phil.

I always like to see a nice "ouchie dance", or as one of the girls called it "the burning bottom boogie"! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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web-ed wrote:I'm a little late here, Phil, but happy to see the latest installment. I think we all love to see the spankee rubbing her bottom after the spanking, and Xandra does that one better by adding a little dance. Meanwhile, her housemates continue to rub it in - I don't see how Xandra lives this episode down as she's sure to be taunted about it pretty much forever :lol: !
Hi web-ed,

First off, I'm glad you enjoyed the view in this scene :D . You're right, of course. We do all love to see a naughty girl rubbing her bottom after a good spanking and if she's dancing, so much the better 8-) . It does appear that Xandra will never live this down and that's probably true to a certain extent although I do think her friends will ease up on her some and perhaps even show some sympathy as time goes on. I wouldn't be at all surprised if she comes out of this with a nickname though :lol: . Of course, it's also possible that Xandra will giggle about all this with these same girls as time goes on and perhaps at some of their spankings as the girls share their experiences ;) .
web-ed wrote: I can't imagine what comes next, but I'm eager to find out. :)
We'll be finding out shortly...........at least if I can get time to work on more pics :lol: . Thanks, Phil
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daneldorado wrote:Earlier, I wrote that it looked to me as if this story had come to an end when Walter ended his fiery attack on Xandra's bottom... but Phil Overbarrel replied that no, he has more of the story in mind. It's been an exhausting voyage, just getting us -- ALL of us -- to this point. I can't imagine what lies in store for us now, unless Walter plans to begin spanking all the other sorority sisters, one by one; and that would be SIX (6!) more girls, if I'm counting right! Seriously now, do you think Walter would have that much energy left, after all he has just been through?
Hi Dan,

I've noticed that there are certain elements that all spanking scenarios have in common, which makes it difficult to surprise viewers with new developments. Anyway, it makes me feel pretty good to know that you can't imagine what's coming next :D . I don't want to give the story away but I will say that Walter will not be using any of his remaining strength for spanking any of the onlookers today. I think he has more a interesting use for that strength 8-) .
daneldorado wrote:I agree that Xandra's future will feature A LOT of "taunting" from her girlfriends. After all, they have just witnessed their friend getting the mother of all spankings, and on her bare derriere! Yep, Xandra will be hearing about this episode for a long time to come. She may decide to change schools, move out of state, even change her name, to avoid hearing these stories for the rest of her life!
Just read my reply to web-eds comments for the answer to your questions :D .
daneldorado wrote:Mmm, yeah. Now THAT's the sort of ending I envision for this very enjoyable story.

Cheers,
Dan
You probably know me well enough to know that I like a romantic story with some spanking in it so I think you can rest assured Walter will be taking good care of Xandra ;) . Thanks, Phil
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hugob00m wrote:Hi, Phil.

I always like to see a nice "ouchie dance", or as one of the girls called it "the burning bottom boogie"! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
I'm glad you enjoyed the view :D .......and the dance name :lol: . Thanks, Phil
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Wouldn't it be nice, if ABC-TV's hit show "Dancing With the Stars" would add "The Ouchie Dance" as one of its new categories? I can think of several fem stars who would be ideal in the finals. :lol:

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A Job well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D think she learn her lesson :lol:
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daneldorado wrote:Wouldn't it be nice, if ABC-TV's hit show "Dancing With the Stars" would add "The Ouchie Dance" as one of its new categories? I can think of several fem stars who would be ideal in the finals. :lol:

Cheers,
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Hi Dan,

I would definitely be watching that show :lol: . Thanks, Phil
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butch46163@yahoo.com wrote:A Job well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D think she learn her lesson :lol:
Hi Butch,

I agree, it was a job well done :D . I think there are some clean up chores but the basic lesson has indeed been learned. Thanks, Phil
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Hi everyone,


I'm sorry I'm late with this one but this is the first chance I've had to post the new pic :roll: . It appears that Xandra is feeling sorry for herself :cry: ......her friends, not so much :lol: . I hope you enjoy the new pic. Phil
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Excellent final panel, Phil. Xandra's friends, who witnessed the entire spanking, are commenting precisely as you would expect them to in real life. Some of them show very little sympathy -- like the long-haired girl in pants, who says: "You behaved like a spoiled brat and Walter spanked your ass for it!" Not very sympathetic to Xandra's plight. The blonde girl in blue denims sarcastically says: "Oh, you poor mistreated baby! Hahaha!" Again, not sympathetic... but still, funny. They're all enjoying themselves.

But I do like Peggy's response, I guess in a thought balloon to herself: "Xandra doesn't yet know what a lucky girl she is... but I bet she will before this day is over... Giggle!" If I'm interpreting this correctly, Peggy is anticipating a monumental session of sex she suspects Walter and Xandra are about to enjoy, in the aftermath of this very arousing spanking.

You did it, Phil. You brought it all to life with your wit and your artistry. Many thanks.

Cheers,
Dan
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Well done, artistically and comedy wise!

If there is a session of hot sex to come for Walter & Xandra I think our red faced, red arsed little blonde will want to be on top! :roll:
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daneldorado wrote:Excellent final panel, Phil. Xandra's friends, who witnessed the entire spanking, are commenting precisely as you would expect them to in real life. Some of them show very little sympathy -- like the long-haired girl in pants, who says: "You behaved like a spoiled brat and Walter spanked your ass for it!" Not very sympathetic to Xandra's plight. The blonde girl in blue denims sarcastically says: "Oh, you poor mistreated baby! Hahaha!" Again, not sympathetic... but still, funny. They're all enjoying themselves.
Hi Dan,

I'm glad you think this is an excellent final panel :D . However, it is not the final panel :lol: . I still have more action planned after a few transitional panels. Normally, I would post 2-3 of these transitional panels at a time to speed things along but I have been really busy and am not very far ahead so I will probably just post them one at a time to give me time to do more. We will be getting back to some spanking action soon though.

I also liked your comment that the girls are commenting precisely as would be predicted :D . I have a spankee friend who used to live in a dorm and see totally agrees with you on this :D . The girl who is telling it like it is and saying that she behaved like a spoiled brat, is Xandra's room mate, Anna. Personally, I thought this kind of analytical comment is exactly what could be expected from a room mate and a presumably close friend so your comment pleased me :D . The sarcastic blonde girl is Barb, Walter's friend, and the one who let him know what was going on in the first place, so it seemed to me that she would not be very sympathetic about Xandra's sore bottom :lol: . As a matter of fact, she already disapproved of Xandra's behavior and was happy to see her finally getting the spanking she deserved 8-) .
daneldorado wrote:But I do like Peggy's response, I guess in a thought balloon to herself: "Xandra doesn't yet know what a lucky girl she is... but I bet she will before this day is over... Giggle!" If I'm interpreting this correctly, Peggy is anticipating a monumental session of sex she suspects Walter and Xandra are about to enjoy, in the aftermath of this very arousing spanking.
I think you have Peggy figured out perfectly ;) . Peggy is the one in the group who understands all the benefits of a girl getting spanked by her boyfriend. She seems to think that it's well worth the pain and embarrassment of getting a spanking because of all the benefits to their relationship 8-) .
daneldorado wrote:You did it, Phil. You brought it all to life with your wit and your artistry. Many thanks.

Cheers,
Dan
This comment brought a big grin to my face :D . I love knowing that the story has come alive for you so far. Thanks, Phil
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willjohn wrote:Well done, artistically and comedy wise!

If there is a session of hot sex to come for Walter & Xandra I think our red faced, red arsed little blonde will want to be on top! :roll:
Hi Willjohn,

It pleases me that you are enjoying both the pics and the comedy :D . As you know, I really like spankings between romantic partners and you can rest assured that Walter and Xandra will be finishing their re connection with a session in the bedroom 8-) . As for her being on top........she may want to but personally, I would put her on her back and let her rock back and forth on her sore bottom..........just to add to the intensity :lol: . Thanks, Phil
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Wow! I love this latest panel, with Xandra rubbing her sore bottom and telling her friends to stop laughing at her! Of course she gets no sympathy from any of them, since they've all been spanked by their boyfriends too! (Probably for a lot less!)

Pretty soon Walter and Xandra are going to require a bit of privacy... but after that... are we going to see her on the next morning? As she avoids having to sit down? Perhaps carrying a pillow around for the times she'll have to sit? Everyone except for her dorm-mates wondering what's going on... and them snickering quietly?
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hugob00m wrote:Wow! I love this latest panel, with Xandra rubbing her sore bottom and telling her friends to stop laughing at her! Of course she gets no sympathy from any of them, since they've all been spanked by their boyfriends too! (Probably for a lot less!)
Hi Boom,

I'm glad you enjoyed this pic :D . Bottom rubbing pics are almost as good as the spanking panels, especially if there are onlookers :lol: . Those onlookers do indeed know what it feels like and they also know that Xandra has needed a good spanking for a long time so they're happy to see her finally get it.
hugob00m wrote:Pretty soon Walter and Xandra are going to require a bit of privacy... but after that... are we going to see her on the next morning? As she avoids having to sit down? Perhaps carrying a pillow around for the times she'll have to sit? Everyone except for her dorm-mates wondering what's going on... and them snickering quietly?
In just a couple panels, Walter and Xandra will be making their exit from the lounge to go back to his place for that privacy that you mentioned :D . I don't want to give the story away but I will say that we will indeed be seeing her the next day along with some of her friends 8-) . Thanks, Phil
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This is becoming an epic!
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willjohn wrote:This is becoming an epic!
Hi Willjohn,

It may well wind up that way. There were several people who thought this was the end of the story and I guess I could have ended it here but I think there is still more of the story to be told 8-) . Thanks, Phil
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